Thursday, October 21, 2010

Offering Forgiveness

Thanks to Lucas, Tina, Alectra, Sedra, Kevin, realfield, Mistress Simone and Mia for the comments. :)

5 comments:

  1. love it hun exalent work as always :)

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  2. This one was very interesting. I think I got over halfway through it before I realized that Jordan is the guy...good use of dialog that could go either way.

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  3. I find the tone of the dialog so sexy. The lost to the lust is so steamy. Excellent work, you really pushed some buttons.

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  4. Only thing is, I don't wanna be jorden, but his friend.

    Very fun cap to read. You did a great job on it.

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  5. MMM Jordan... Um I mean, good work as usual sweetie =)

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