great cap and thanks for the update with your email
One critique, the background is a bit hard on the eyes as one tries to read, now......The caption itself is outstanding. Love the POV dialogue. Neat little twist there with the girlfriend being added.Good Job!
A very awesome caption. now to go bug you in e-mail form
Lady Alexia: Thanks for the critique. I went ahead and lightened the background behind the text so hopefully it is easier to read. :)